The Loss
By Jana Tropper
Rated: PG for mild violence.
Summary: When Steve saves Jesse’s life and loses his own in the process, the
gang struggles to deal with his death.
"You don’t want to do this," Detective Steve Sloan said, slowly walking
towards the man with the gun. The gunman cocked the gun back.
"Oh, yeah? You want to test me?" he said nervously. He looked over at the
table closest to him, where Dr. Jesse Travis and his girlfriend, Susan
Hilliard, had just been so conveniently sitting. He lowered the gun to
Jesse’s head.
"No, I don’t. I’ll get you the money, all right? Don’t hurt anyone while
I’m gone, okay?"
"Just get the money," he growled. His hands in the air to show he was
unarmed, Steve stepped behind the BBQ Bob’s counter. Without making any
sudden moves, he slowly opened the drawer to the cash register and pulled out
all the money. He reached under the counter and took out a paper back, in
which he deposited the money.
"There you go," Steve said, slowly handing the money to the robber. "Now you
can leave and no one got hurt." He looked down at Jesse, who looked more
terrified than ever.
"Yeah, maybe." He turned the gun and pointed it directly at Steve’s chest.
"You’re a robber already. Don’t add murder to the charges." Steve swallowed
hard and slowly walked over to stand near Jesse, the gunman keeping his eyes
on him. The gunman pulled the trigger and Steve jumped in front of Jesse
just in time for the young doctor to get away unharmed. The gunman raced out
of the restaurant and Jesse fell to his knees at Steve’s side to see a large
bloodstain forming in the center of his shirt and spreading with each passing
moment.
"Steve!" Susan cried.
"Call an ambulance!" Jesse ordered. He took a few napkins and pressed them
against Steve’s unconscious form. "Hold on, Steve. Okay?" The detective
showed no response. Jesse checked his pulse. Weak as it was, it was still
there.
"I just called one. It’s on its way," Susan said, hurrying back to her
boyfriend’s side.
"Good," Jesse murmured. The napkins, formerly white, were now bright red
with his best friend’s blood. "This has to stop bleeding if he’s going to
make it."
"It there anything I can do?"
"Get out front and wait for that ambulance!" Minutes passed and no ambulance
had arrived. Precious minutes had been lost while Steve lay in the middle of
the floor of BBQ Bob’s. Suddenly, Jesse heard Steve draw in a ragged breath.
"Steve? Steve, can you hear me? You have to stay awake," Jesse said. He
cradled his head in his hands. "All right?"
"Tell my dad I love him," he murmured. Then, he passed out again.
"Steve? Steve? Come on, buddy. Hold on." He turned and looked out the
front window. "Where the hell are they?!" Jesse roared. Just then, the
blessed wail of sirens sounded in the distance. "Thank God." Everything
after that was a blur. The paramedics arrived and loaded Steve on a
stretcher. Susan and Jesse hopped in Jesse’s car and followed the ambulance.
Just as Steve on the gurney and the paramedics burst into the atrium of the
Community General ER, Dr. Mark Sloan, his father, had just come out of the
doctor’s lounge. Having just gotten off his shift, he wasn’t concerned with
the excitement going on in the ER. When the tall, brown-haired police
lieutenant
was wheeled into the OR, he didn’t take notice. But when Jesse and Susan
burst through the doors after them, he looked up in surprise.
Jesse ran up to him and began to explain things, but he was so upset, Mark
couldn’t understand a word he was saying.
"Jesse, calm down. What happened?"
"Steve... hold-up... BBQ Bob’s... shot... blood... ambulance..." was all he
could make out. "Steve was shot!" Jesse was finally able to blurt out.
"What?! Oh my God. Oh, God. My son. Where’s my son?" He looked around
frantically and spotted the still swinging OR doors. He began to head
towards the door, but Jesse stopped him.
"Mark, there’s nothing you can do. Let’s just go into the waiting room and
we..."
"I have to see my son!"
"Mark, listen to me." Jesse held him squarely by the shoulders. "There’s
nothing you can do," he said firmly. "All we can do is wait and hope for the
best."
He was able to guide the elder doctor to a chair just before Mark’s knees
buckled beneath him.
"What happened, Jesse?" Mark asked, still reeling from the shock.
"We were in BBQ Bob’s when a robber came in and held the place up. Steve
gave him the money and everything, but I guess that wasn’t enough. The
gunman shot at me, but Steve knocked me out of the way and took the bullet
for himself. Mark, your son -my best friend- saved my life."
Mark nodded, still not absorbing everything that has taken place.
"Your son is a hero," Jesse said. "Steve saved my life." Just then, Captain
Newman entered the waiting room.
"We got him, Dr. Sloan," he said. "We caught the bastard and he’s going away
for a long time."
"That doesn’t matter to me. What matters to me is my son’s life," Mark said
firmly. Captain Newman lowered his eyes and left the room, just as Amanda
was coming in.
"Mark, I just heard. I am so sorry." Mark stood up and they quickly
embraced.
"That’s all right, honey," Mark said.
"If there’s anything I can do..." Amanda began.
"Just pray for Steve." Amanda nodded.
"Want me to get some coffee?"
"Sure," Jesse said. "Well, I want some at least. I don’t know about Mark.
Mark, do you want any?"
"Okay," he agreed numbly. He closed his eyes and remembered the last time he
got word his son was shot. Steve had been eating in a restaurant when a
busboy opened fire. Steve jumped at him and was shot once in the chest and
twice in the stomach. For days, he had been in a coma, Mark spending many a
night in the chair by his hospital bed. Steve, however, did wake up and made
a full recovery just in time to save Mark from a jail sentence.
All the same emotions raced through him. The anger and hate he felt towards
the gunman. The terror he was sure his son felt just before the bullet hit
him. The fear that he may never see his son alive again.
Just then, Amanda came back into the room,. It wasn’t until she was close
that Mark saw tears glistening on her cheeks and fresh ones pouring out of
her eyes every moment.
"Mark..." she began between short sobs. "Mark, they lost him. They said..."
She couldn’t stop the tears falling down her face and Jesse stood up just in
time to catch her from collapsing. "Oh, God..."
"It’s all right," Jesse comforted her. Mark bolted out of his seat and into
the OR he had seen Steve being taken into. It couldn’t be happening. It
just couldn’t. Inside, doctors were peeling off their plastic gloves and
nurses were wrapping up the equipment. There on the OR table, his son lay
motionless. Blood was everywhere: on the scrubs of the doctor and on towels
that had been used to try and stop the bleeding.
"My son..." Mark breathed.
"Dr. Sloan, I’m sorry. We did everything we could to save your son. He just
lost too much blood too fast," the doctor said as he passed him. "I truly am
sorry."
Mark was stunned. He knew denial was the first step after a tragedy, but he
was sure the doctors were wrong. Before anyone could stop him, he was at his
son’s side, stroking his hair and telling him how much he loved him. He felt
a hand come down on his shoulder.
"Mark, he’s gone," Jesse said quietly. Mark couldn’t remember how he got out
of there and into the doctor’s lounge, but the next thing he did remember was
Jesse’s tear-streaked face close to his.
"Mark? Mark, can you hear me?" He turned to Amanda. "Amanda, I think he’s
in shock. Go-"
"No, Jess. I’m okay."
"No, you aren’t," Jesse said firmly. "I’m going to drive you home. I’ll
take care of things here." Mark didn’t answer and Jesse led him out to the
parking lot.
"My son... my Steve..." was all Jesse could make out on the way to the beach
house. Finally, he came into the driveway. "Jesse, I can’t go in there,"
Mark said. "All his things..." It was then when he finally accepted it. He
was now all alone in the beach house. His son would never come back in the
door carrying some fast food and claiming he brought home a nice dinner.
Mark would never be able to wake
up in the morning and poke fun at Steve eating a doughnut and being a
stereotypical cop.
"Want to stay at my place for a few days?" Jesse offered as he saw tears
begin to form in Mark’s eyes.
"Thank you, Jesse," he breathed.
When Amanda opened her eyes, she saw that she was in a hospital bed. She
struggled to remember what had gotten her there. She had just dropped CJ off
at the day care center... She had stopped at the hospital to get an autopsy
report for Steve... Steve.
Suddenly, she remembered everything. Steve’s being shot and his barely
living body being wheeled into the OR. Getting the news he hadn’t made it
and having to tell Mark. It was the hardest thing she could ever remember
doing was to tell a father he had just lost his son. She remembered being
hysterical and feeling a prick in her arm just before everything went black.
She assumed it had been another doctor
giving her a sedative that had calmed her down. Before she could form
another thought, the door to her room swung open slowly.
"You’re awake," Jesse said as he walked in.
"Is he really gone?" Amanda asked softly. She saw Jesse try his hardest to
swallow back tears.
"Yeah." He dug his fingernails in the palm of his hands, forcing tears away.
Amanda wasn’t as good and before Jesse could do anything, she began to cry
again. In an instant, Jesse was at her side, holding her, telling her it was
going to be all right, that they were going to get through it together and
that Steve was in a better place now.
"It’ll be all right. I promise," Jesse said, holding her tightly. Amanda
wiped her eyes and looked up at him.
"What happened?"
"Someone came into BBQ Bob’s holding a gun and he held the place up. He shot
at me and Steve jumped in the way..." He heard Amanda give a little gasp.
"He saved my life, Amanda. Do you know what his last words were?" Amanda
shook his head. "’Tell my dad I love him,’" Jesse quoted. Amanda chewed
her lower lip.
"Did you tell Mark?" Jesse shook his head.
"I was waiting for the right moment. I dropped him off at my place. Right
now, all he should be doing is trying to get himself together. Mark loved
Steve more than life itself," he said sadly.
"I know. Listen, if Mark needs to talk to someone..."
"He needs a little time to himself right now. But he also needs to know
we’re here for him if he needs us."
Mark sat in Jesse’s recliner and stared out the window. The rain tapped
against the window relentlessly. Thunder rumbled and lightning flashed
across the sky. The raindrops rolling down the window mirrored the teardrops
rolling down his cheeks. He was still struggling with the reality of it all.
He closed his eyes and remembered the last conversation he had had with his
son:
"I’m off to Bob’s, Dad!" Steve called from his half of the each house. "Page
me if you need me!"
"Wait!" Mark called. He went down the stairs and saw his son paused at the
door.
"What?"
"Could you ask Jesse if has Friday off?"
"Sure. Why?"
"Well, I know he has the weekend off and I was wondering if this would be the
weekend I taught him how
to ride an ATV. He’s been pestering me forever."
"Friday’s my day off. I’ll show him," Steve said, grinning. He loved to
ride.
"All right. See you later, son. I’m heading for the hospital in a few
minutes."
"Bye, Dad." The door opened and Steve stepped out. That was the last time
Mark ever saw his son alive.
When Mark opened his eyes, he wanted more than ever to be with someone.
Carol. Oh, God, Carol didn’t know her brother was dead. Shaking, he reached
for the phone. He had to let her know, but he didn’t want to make the call.
His hand hovered over the phone and he debated with himself whether or not he
was going to make the call right then. He finally decided he had better tell
her, for putting it off
would only weigh heavily on his mind.
He picked up the receiver, and, knowing the number by heart, called his
daughter in Portland.
"Hello?"
"Carol?"
"Hi, Daddy," Carol said brightly. She had no idea what was happening and
Mark felt his heart break.
"Carol, honey. There’s something very important I need to tell you."
"What? Steve get shot again?" she joked nervously. Mark felt a knife go
through him.
"Yes," he said quietly. There was a silence.
"Is he okay?" she asked softly.
"Carol, he’s gone. They tried to save him, but..." He couldn’t go on as he
heard Carol’s soft crying at the end of the line. "Carol, you shouldn’t be
alone right now. Neither should I," he added as an afterthought. "Come to
the beach house. We can start... planning things."
"All right, Daddy. I’ll get the next flight out."
"Carol, you should wait until morning..." The classic fatherly tone was
dominant in Mark’s voice.
"No, Daddy. I’m coming now." Before he could protest, Carol hung up the
phone, undoubtedly heading for the airport. Mark slowly hung the phone up,
got his car keys out of his pocket and remembered his car was back at the
hospital. He made sure he had change in his pocket and headed outside.
Just then, a bus came up to the curb.
What timing, Mark thought. He got on and bought a ticket, knowing one stop
was a block away from Community General. The doors made a whoosh as they
closed behind him.
Jesse sat on the floor in Amanda’s darkened pathology lab with his back to
the wall. He had his knees drawn up to his chest and his face was streaked
with tears. What had happened had been all his fault. Steve had been killed
trying to save him. He knew there was no way he could have stopped the
gunman, but Jesse still thought that Steve’s death was his fault and no one
else’s. He shifted his position so that his legs didn’t fall asleep and
buried his face in his hands.
Just then, the light flicked on and Mark stood illuminated in the doorway.
"Jesse? What are you doing in here?"
"Mark, what are you doing here?"
"I asked first." It was a childish response, he knew, but he was too tired.
"I was just... getting something," Jesse lied, wiping his eyes and standing
up.
"What happened," Mark began, "wasn’t your fault."
"Yes, it was!" Jesse exploded. "If he hadn’t taken the bullet for me, I
would be the dead one and he’d be all right. I should have offered to go as
a hostage or something!"
"Jesse, you’re talking crazy. What happened isn’t your fault," he repeated.
"My son knew you would do for the same for him."
Jesse calmed down. "I would," he agreed. "Mark, there’s something I need to
tell you," Jesse confessed.
"What is it?"
"After Steve was shot, he was conscious for a few moments. His last words
were, "Tell my dad I love him.’" He was quiet for a moment.
"I love him, too," Mark said, his tears now reflecting Jesse’s.
"Now, why are you here?"
"I had to call Carol and tell her about... what happened. I came here to get
my car because she’s meeting me at the beach house."
"Mark, I really wish you wouldn’t..."
"Jesse, I’ll have to go back there some time." He turned and left. Jesse
closed his eyes and fell back against the wall, sinking all the way to the
floor.
Mark turned the key in the lock and opened the door tentatively. He closed
the door behind him and flipped the light on. He stepped into the kitchen
and turned on the light. He sat at the kitchen table for a moment, reviewing
the events of the day.
Before he knew what he was doing, he was walking down the stairs to his son’s
half of the house. He slowly made his way into Steve’s bedroom, sheets and
blankets thrown to the ground as if Steve had just left them where they were
after he got out of bed. He sat on the bed and looked at the night stand.
On the stand was a picture of Mark; Steve’s mom, Kathryn; Carol; and Steve
all together as a family. Mark
remembered it had been taken a few days before Mrs. Sloan found out she had
been diagnosed with cancer.
He sat looking at the picture for what could have been seconds, minutes,
hours, but he wouldn’t have known the difference. The next thing he
remembered was hearing a knock at the door. He stood and walked to the door.
When he got there, a scared looking Carol stood illuminated in the automatic
porch light.
"Daddy?" She fell into his arms and stayed there for a long moment.
Finally, Mark guided the woman back into the house. They sat on the couch
and held each other, crying. They remembered the good times they had shared
with Steve and even some of the bad ones. It was nearly midnight when Carol
finally fell asleep in her father’s arms. As if she weighed no more than a
feather, he lifted her up and
carried her into Steve’s bed. He tucked the covers around her and kissed her
gently on the forehead.
Slowly, he dragged himself up the stairs and into his own room. He changed
into his pajamas and slid under the covers, falling into a fitful sleep.
The day of Steve’s funeral, at least 100 people showed up. Friends, family,
and fellow officers were there. As the casket was lowered into the ground,
the crying grew louder. Jesse, Amanda, Mark and Carol were standing off to
the side. As the crowd began to disperse, Carol clung to her father tighter.
"It’s all right, honey. He’s happy," Mark said to her. He brought his arms
around her. "Could I have a few minutes alone?" he asked. Carol nodded and
walked off with Jesse and Amanda. He bowed his head and closed his eyes.
When he opened them again, there was a young girl, perhaps thirteen or
fourteen, dressed in a pair of jeans and a t-shirt, kneeling down at Steve’s
grave.
Silently, Mark stood behind her. As if she knew he was there, she looked up
at him with tears in her eyes.
"Are you Dr. Sloan?" she asked softly. "Steve’s dad?"
"Yeah."
"He helped me through a lot," she said quietly, looking back at the grave.
"I used to get in a lot of trouble and he stood up for me. My older brother
just got mixed up with the wrong people. He’s the only guy down at the
station that gave me the time of day," she said with a twisted smile. "Now
he’s gone." She looked back up at him. "I miss him."
"I do, too," Mark said, swallowing back tears. The girl touched the cool
granite of the stone and stood up. Her head bowed, she jammed her hands in
her pockets and walked off towards the cemetery gates.
That night, Mark couldn’t get to sleep. He stared at the ceiling for a long
time, his hands cupped behind his head. Finally, he took a sleeping pill, a
strong one, and was finally able to drift off to sleep.
***Where am I? Mark thought, looking at his surroundings. They were blurry,
yet they seemed familiar. He saw his son standing in the center of where he
was. The room sharpened and he realized he was in BBQ Bob’s. Steve was
facing a man with a gun. Suddenly, the gun went off and Steve jumped in
front of the bullet, knocking Jesse out of its path.***
"Steve!" Mark sat straight up and looked around. His room was exactly as it
had always been. He pinched himself. "Ow!" he said out loud. Before he
could form another complete thought, he jumped out of bed and raced out of
the room. He paused in the doorway, feeling dizzy from the sudden movement.
A second later, he bolted down the stairs nearly tripping all over himself.
"Steve?" he called out
hopefully. There was no response. It hadn’t been a dream. His shoulders
slumped and he fell into a chair. He had thought that it might have been a
dream, but his hopes had been dashed. He had accepted his son was dead, but
he wanted to grasp at any straws he could.
"Dad, what are you doing racing through the house at all hours of the night?"
Mark looked up to see his son. The most wonderful sight ever. True, his
hair was messed up and he was in a ratty police shirt and a old pair of
boxers, but it was the greatest thing Mark had ever seen. Mark stood up
shakily. Before Steve could do anything, Mark wrapped his arms around him
and held him for a long time. "Dad, are
you all right?" Mark didn’t answer. He was all right because it had been a
dream. Not reality. His son’s body wasn’t laying cold in the morgue.
"I thought you were dead," Mark whispered stepping back to look at his son.
"You thought what?"
"It was a dream. All a dream," Mark breathed.
"Dad, are you all right? Maybe I should..."
"No, Steve, I’m fine. Go back to bed. I’m sorry I woke you up." Steve
turned to go back, but stopped suddenly.
"Dad?"
"Hmm?"
"Where I’m at... I’m happy." And with that, his form faded away as if he had
never been there.
"Steve?" he called out tentatively. The door to Steve’s bedroom opened and
Carol stood in the doorway.
"Daddy?" It hadn’t been a dream. Oh, God. Steve was really dead.
"Go back to bed, honey. I just had a bad dream." Carol nodded and went back
into her brother’s room. Mark slowly closed his eyes and a tear slid out
from under an eyelid. Had he really just seen his son? Had he really
appeared to him? Or was it just his mind playing tricks on him? When Dr.
Mark Sloan fell asleep that night, he knew he would never know for sure. He
just knew his son was happy and that someday, he would see him
again.